Radiohead - Street Spirit (Completed)

SingingWomble thanks for your not indifferent participation. As for me your two previous tracks sound better than new ones so please download proceeded in DAW your previous tracks and submit them for acception. The link is https://drive.google.com/drive..../folders/1CUUR4DY5L1

@Andrei : Thanks Andrei, done. I can see why you like the older one better, but I like the new one better. Well now you can proceed and if you want you could leave the collab open for other singers or me trying at a later point in time, because your recording is really good. :)

@SingingWomble: I don't see principal difference in your tracks, just in your last attempt your voice is too hoarse ... If you like to change something better way you could performe it as clear voice as you can (not hoarse) and not too pathetically. Thom York performs it with melancholy but not pathetically. Otherwise it's always will be the same.

@SingingWomble: A fine rendition, Marc. It is great to be a part of this with you all.

@Daniel Ramos (@dan00075): Thank you Daniel, much appreciated. :)

Anyway Marga thanks for feedback, see you next time!

It could be a nice performance but you have to polish it. "Fade out again" in the first two choruses you have some false at "out" word, in the las chorus it sounds ok. There are "oh-oh" and "m-m-m" singing in breaks 2'00-2'19 and 3'17-end. Vocals doesn't work without this back so as well are needed two layers of BV, or you can include "m-m-m" into LV track + 1 layer of BT. If you're ready to proceed working on this and redo i can guarantee acception.

@Andrei : I will try some more times, not today anymore though. :)

@SingingWomble: If you want a perfect recording, maybe try to run your first guitar through a low-cut filter because the sub bass of the fingers touching can be tough through some headphones, especially before the bass sets in.

@SingingWomble: take your time, record and submit only when you'll be ready, no rush. Do you know how to use low-cut filter in Reaper DAW?

@Andrei : They use high-pass. I think here you can see where to go. youtube.com/watch?v=WX44ZNB66xU

@Andrei : Well, I have to record anyway to really hear everything,you can't hear yourself singing like playing a guitar. Anyway, I updated the recording adding BV. Constructive criticism welcome though I cannot guarantee I will manage a flawless recording. :)

@SingingWomble: thanks for yor job, pretty decent vocals taking into account difficulty of it. I will accept both your tracks, i'd like to process it in DAW befor. Then i'll give you link for your two new video, you'll download it and submit for acception.

@Andrei : Only if you can work with it from here. I wouldn't mind giving it one or two more attempts , especially the BVs were only a fist try.

@SingingWomble: If you feel that you can do it better please go on, just let me know when you'll get the best of you.